Today, my group pitched our initial idea to the other groups in the class and our teachers. When we had finished, we received some constructive feedback on what we can do to improve our idea.
We were first told that the plot we had made for the thriller genre was excellent, and matched the conventions of our genre. However, we was told that our opening didn't suit our plot, and that we should re-think what we do for our opening scene. Our original opening involved a chase scene, but our teacher Mr Lawes said that the opening to ours needed to be more slow and more simple, he recommended that we watch films such as 'lost in translation' to get ideas on how to create a suitable opening scene to our plot.
So now my group will go away today and watch films such as 'lost in translation' and 'american beauty' to get inspiration and come up with a new opening sequence.
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